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Storyteller seeks feedback on work

Hello PinoyExchange,

I've recently written and illustrated a story of mine and would like to hear feedback from you guys.

Was the story comprehensible? Was is difficult to read? ANY comment would be great!

Hope you enjoy reading.

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