POETRY POSTING sa PEX....post ur poems and woes here!!!

[strange_daze]

PA SALI HA?


an hour of mischief

I sit restless
on one corner;
You stare blankly
at the other.
Drenched in a pool
of confusion
We soar.
With no inhibitions,
crooked aspirations
Of lifeless persuasion
embedded deep
Within passion.
As my lips touch your skin;
And your skin
satiates my spine.
No inhibitions-
A satire of conclusions.
An hour of mischief
In cold December

[strange_daze]

PA SALI HA?


an hour of mischief

I sit restless
on one corner;
You stare blankly
at the other.
Drenched in a pool
of confusion
We soar.
With no inhibitions,
crooked aspirations
Of lifeless persuasion
embedded deep
Within passion.
As my lips touch your skin;
And your skin
satiates my spine.
No inhibitions-
A satire of conclusions.
An hour of mischief
In cold December

[pNAiXsHoRtEe022]

I
I feel my tearz
pourin down mai face
I see raindrops
fallin on tha streamz
I hear my heart
beatin non-stop
I wish it wud end
lyk ur love that did
I sleep @ nite
still dreamin about yooh
I dream in my sleep
waitin 4 ur call
I miss ur voice & face
hopin 4 ur sweet embrace
I cherish all tha tymz spent
tho short but always livin in meh
I needa let u go
but in mai heart we'll neva part
I find it hard
to stop thinkin ob yooh
I keep feelings 2 myself till now
I wake up each mornin
hallucinatin u were myn
I kiss u goodbye
keepin u 4ver in mai heart
**MWAHZ**


FOOL
tha pain I have to feel
tha tearz I have to dry
tha hopes I dreamt about
tha scarz I wish to mend
tha songz I hoped to sing
tha luv I longed for
tha nites I waited
tha broken promises I have to take
tha lies I believed in
tha tymz I have to look back
tha voices I hear
tha thingz I c
tha anger I have to hide
tha soul I have 2 look for
tha fool I see in me


ALL NIGHT LONG
All night long
In my sleepless nights
I hear broken promises
Askin myself, why?
Why I fell hearin your lies
We’re in separate worlds
You broke my heart into pieces
No one knowz why
I see my tear eyes
Weepin in my prayers
Mouth so full of unexpressed words
All night long
In my sleepless nights…


BROKEN HEART
sittin alone in tha dark
thinkin y u had 2
tellin myself that i'd be ok
but feelin sad and cold
singin luv songz 2 mahself
waitin in tha cold, dark nyt
hopin dat one day, my heart
wud be mended from tha scarz...

EVERYNIGHT
everynight as i sleep, i cry
i ask the good Lord, why?
these tears never seem to dry
it gets worse as i seem to die
everynight as i lay me down,
i feel like breaking down
the pain in me i hope is gone
hopin to look back someday
and just laugh @ all of these
everynight as i pray, i weep
my heart's bleedin, i dunno y...
everynight before I dream, I think
confusion.. thoughtz.. words runnin thru mah head...
all i notice are the wattery eyes...

[wasto]

nice attempt at poetry, but I think you should work your grammar and spelling. basic english

[vinta18]

^ I second the motion. Know the rules first before you break them. Poetic license is never an excuse for plain sloppy grammar and bad writing.

[illumina]

Indeed. Still a long way to go before you get to the level of e.e. cummings.

[pNAiXsHoRtEe022]

Excuse me, i have A's in English and just because I type like that doesn't mean I'm dumb... But yeah, I know.. thanks

[vinta18]

^ Well we have no other way of judging your writing skills except by the way you type

[pNAiXsHoRtEe022]

okay! thanks for the feedback!

[illumina]

Never said you were dumb.

[nbakaguilar]

welcome...purplewitch10 don't worry you're not alone. this is also the first time i write a poem i'm so happy that others like it, just try and try until you succeed.

Also thank you very much to all those who contributed their poems and making this thread alive.

'MERRY CHRISTMAS AND HAPPY NEW YEAR"

[Awasha_Nadine]

rampage's poems are really nice. and her friends' is too. are you planning to publish them? let us know will ya? i'll get a copy if you do ;-)

anyways, here's my attempt at writing. criticisms more than welcome :
FATHOM ME
by allansed
You wept where my soul lay,
And I, ignorant in the rapture of bliss in revenge,
I kept silent
Did not.
Could not.
Fathom why.

You wept where my path crossed yours,
And I, ignorant in the delight of joy in punishment,
I kept silent.
Did not.
Could not
Fathom why.

You wept where my eyes gazed,
And I, ignorant in the facade of pretense in joy,
I kept silent.
Did not.
Could not.
Fathom why.

You wept where my words reached your ears,
And I, ignorant in the excitement of thrill in the future,
I kept silent.
Did not.
Could not.
Fathom why.

You wept, and I doubled up in gaiety.
For while you saw me, I saw you.
I saw you.

You see?
I kept silent
Because you could not.
I kept silent
Because you would not.
I kept silent.
Because you did not fathom why.

[deadpoet]

Sumama na yata sa dugo ko ang gatas na ininom ko kanina
ngunit hanggang ngayo’y di pa rin ako dalawin ng antok
kahit anong lamig pa ang dala ng gabi. Bakit ikaw,
itinumba mo ang matapang na kape, pero hayan
at malayang namamaluktot, yakap ang matigas na unan.
Pinapanood kita sa yong pagbiling-biling sa nilamutak na kutson.
at sa lumalalim mong pagtulog habang hinuhukay ko mag-isa
ang gabing iyon, nabibingi rin ako sa hagok ng iyong paghilik -
hudyat na nagtagumpay ka na naman at narating ang mga panaginip.
Mag-isa ka na namang nakapaglakbay
sa mga pangarap na dapat tayong dalawa ang aabot.
Nangako naman akong sasamahan kita kahit saan ngunit bakit
hanggang sa panaginip di mo ako kayang pagtiwalaan.
Iniwan mo na naman akong nakatunganga… naghihintay
sa pagbabalik ng yong ulirat…nag-aabang na sana’y bigla kang
maalimpungatan at makita mong gising pa pala ako sa tabi mo
at tila kuwagong nakamasid sa ‘yong paghimlay. Naghihintay
na kahit pakunwari, kahit pasinghal pa, kahit walang anomang
lambing sabihin mo sa akin, “tulog na tayo”.

[deadpoet]

Isang lagok.
Dalawa.
At marami pang isa;
Katagay ko ang sarili habang walang patid
sa paghithit-buga ng sama ng loob.
Pinapula pa ni Stephen Bishop
ang tenga ko ng sumundot siya ng "Separate Lives".
At sa bawat straight shot
ay lasang-lasa pa rin ng dila
ang tapang ng katotohanan
kahit sabihing may chaser pa;
ramdam kong gumuguhit sa lalamunan
ang init ng mga tagpong nag-iwan ng puwang
sa pagitan natin-
binabaybay na may halong pambubuska
ang bawat pinong ugat
na pasukdol sa puso.
Maya-maya'y sasanib na ang espiritu ng kapanglawan,
lalanguin ang balisang isip
hanggang sa maging tipsy
pati lahat ng kalamnan ng katawan
at tuluyang sumuka
at magkalat ng hinagpis sa unan.

Nakalalasing din pala ang pag-iisa
lalo't ako at ako rin ang tumatagay
at tinatagayan ng alak ng nakaraan.
Makakailang round pa kaya ako nito
gayong di ko naman matantiya kung ilang case pa ba
ng mapapait na gunita
ang ihahatag sa aking mesa
na dapat kong itumba gabi-gabi?
Problema pa rin nga ang hang-over sa umaga
na di naman kayang ikubli kahit ng hazel brown kong contact lens.

- Disyembre 01, 2003

[nek_02]

Perhaps someday I shall see why you cloak yourself with the night.

But for now I shall appease myself with the portrait
Of your smile painted in the solstice’s twilight.
And imaginings of days to come
Imaginings of days to come

Someday I shall see why I chase endlessly
Yet remain amidst the passing tide
As the waves make love to the shore
I linger to adore
Linger
And linger more.

[nek_02]

Soliloquy 1: Abstract


Technicolor smile that puts the rainbow to shame. With eyes that outshine the stars. Songs floating in a silent midnight. Nocturnal rhythms pacifying a restless soul. Intoxicated by your laughter showered in my dreams. Your endless charades and cloaked words. Keep the saxophone humming with tears. Soliloquy in solitude is solace. So and so. Are you a soldier fighting for sorrow? Doppelganger, I need you. So I can tread the unknown Without leaving this home. Truth. Taboo. You. Notes from your guitar solo—stringed to become a lullaby in yellow. Where do you want me to go? Perhaps to the Urals between? Tell me and I shall follow. See the senseless series? I say what is inside me Then came the screeching tires. Damn distractions. There you are. Standing still. Gone before you came. You and I. You. Like a child. Playing. Knowing yet not. Pretending, maybe. Or simply, oblivious. I. Like the rain. Weeping. In grief yet smiling. Insane, maybe. Or simply, oblivious. Silence. Utter goodbye. Goodnight.

[kesibi]

sana mi-LINK dito yung thread kong KESIBI WRITES. Matagal ko ng hinhanap yon. Content ay weird poems I made.

[22mai]

sarap mag post sana dito kaso mahirap na...im serious with my works kaya ayun baka makopya lang. i mean, planning to join some contests sana...di ako magaling pero mahirap na...

happy new year nbakaguilar!

[nbakaguilar]

Thank you 22mai at nakita mo rin ang thread na ito, katuwaan lang naman ito welcome ang bawat isa sa pag contribute.

"Happy New Year to all"

[PApAmpAm_pAmPaM]

SUWAIL
by: papampam_pampam

Pumainlanlang
mula sa sinapupunan.
Sige, iri pa inay.
Lalabas na
abg anak mong may sungay.

simple lang... pero sana maappreciate nyo...